USE-2018
Task 20 in the 2018 exam materials checks the formation of skills in stylistic editing (inappropriate use of words, forms or structures) in coherent texts (sentences). It should be noted that a lot of material for creating a task is contained in the essays of the exam participants.
Tasks for the preparation of task 20:
Compared to the provinces, the capital region is distinguished by a high level of economic literacy of the population.
Answer:_________________
2. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
The companies involved in the oil spill incident in the Gulf of Mexico made a number of decisions to prevent similar incidents in the future.
Answer:_________________
3 .
Answer: _______________________
4 . Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
At the end of the 17th century, the supporters of Princess Sophia were defeated in a battle with the troops of the young reformer of Russia, Peter the Great. .
Answer:
5 . Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
Answer: _______________
6
The writer's path to recognition and love of the reading public is often strewn with prickly thorns and full of temptations. .
Answer: __________________
7. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by excluding the extra word. Write out this word.
Attending the first premiere of a performance based on a play by a modern French playwright gave us great pleasure.
Answer: ________________
8. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
With many years of faithful service, Bakhteev wanted to make amends for his reckless act committed in his youth.
Answer: _____________________
9. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by excluding the extra word. Write out this word.
The royal dynasty of the Stuart family, which was in power in Great Britain for a long time, ended its existence in 1714. .
Answer: ___________
10. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
A series of lectures were devoted to the work of A.P. Chekhov, at which excerpts from his work were read .
Answer: _____________________________
11. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by excluding the extra word. Write out this word.
Answer_______________________
12. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
After a two-month visit to the Turkins' house and reverent courtship for Katenka, Startsev gave her a hand and a heart. .
Answer: ______________________
13. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by excluding the extra word. Write out this word.
In the performance of the Oryol Drama Theater "The Warrior", the role of Domna Platonovna was played by the famous Moscow actress Vera Vasilyeva .
Answer: ______________________________
14. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by excluding the extra word. Write out this word.
Answer: __________________
15. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
Answer: ______________
16. Edit the sentence: correct the lexical error by replacing the incorrectly used word. Write down the chosen word, observing the norms of the modern Russian literary language.
Answer: ________________________
Answers
1. Compared to the provinces, the capital region is distinguished by a high level of economic literacy of the population.
Decision: No phrase "high level ", right: high level. Answer: Tall.
2. The companies involved in the oil spill incident in the Gulf of Mexico made a number of decisions to prevent similar incidents in the future.
Decision: No phrase "make a decision ”, right: Companies ...accepted a number of solutions. Answer: Accepted
3. A deep abyss opened before the travelers, which was impossible to overcome.
Decision: The phrase "deep abyss" is pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: Deep.
4 . At the end of the 17th century, the supporters of Princess Sophia were defeated in a battle with the troops of the young reformer of Russia, Peter the Great.
Decision: There is no phrase "defeated", correctly:were defeated. Answer: Suffered.
5. The legal adviser of the company was instructed to express his response to the proposals for cooperation received from the Astarta concern within two weeks.
Decision: No phrase "express the answer ", right:give an answer. Answer: To give
6. The writer's path to recognition and love of the reading public is often strewn with prickly thorns and full of temptations.
Decision: The phrase "prickly thorns" - pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: prickly.
7. Visiting the first premiere of a play based on a play by a modern French playwright gave us great pleasure.
Decision: The phrase “first premiere” is pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: First
8. By many years of faithful service, Bakhteev wanted to make amends for his reckless act committed in his youth.
Decision: No phrase "make amends ”, right: to make amends.Answer: Blame.
9. The royal dynasty of the Stuart family, which had been in power in Great Britain for a long time, ended its existence in 1714.
Decision: The phrase “dynasty of the clan” is pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: Kind.
10. A series of lectures were devoted to the work of A.P. Chekhov, at which excerpts from his work were read.
Decision: No phrase "excerpts from creativity ", right:excerpts from works or excerpts from texts. Answer: Texts or Works.
11. Arrogant arrogance and contempt for the people of his tribe made the hero of Gorky's story an outcast.
Decision: The phrase "arrogant arrogance" is pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: Arrogant.
12. After a two-month visit to the Turkins' house and reverent courtship of Katya, Startsev gave her a hand and a heart.
Decision: No phrase "give a hand and a heart ", right:offer a hand and a heart. Answer: Proposed.
13. In the performance of the Oryol Drama Theater "The Warrior", the role of Domna Platonovna was played by the famous capital Moscow actress Vera Vasilyeva.
Decision: The phrase "capital Moscow" is pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: Capital or Moscow.
14. The composer decided to end his piece of music in a merry major key so that the audience would remain in high spirits.
Decision: The phrase "merry major" is pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: cheerful .
15. The career of any athlete cannot be considered completely successful until his most cherished dream has come true - to win the championship in the Olympic wrestling.
Decision: No phrase "take the lead ", right:win a victory. Answer: victory.
16. In the region of the south pole of Jupiter, the astronomer noticed a dark spot and at first mistook it for an unusual weather phenomenon, because storms often rage on this planet.
Decision: The phrase "unusual phenomenon"- pleonasm, two words mean the same thing.Answer: Unusual.
2016-07-20 21:09 Igor_0307
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Law firm "Trusted Lawyer" 2016-06-27 12:15 S Eugene
I, as an ordinary depositor, along with many others, got into a problem with the payment of insurance compensation for a bank whose license was revoked. All my actions, and legal ones, were not crowned with success, I just wasted time, having received an unmotivated refusal. For me, the judicial structure is not new, but I have never dealt with such cases and turned to the Trusted Lawyer company. At the consultation (paid, but if you continue to work further, the money goes towards paying for full support), we sorted out all the documents, all the nuances and continued to work. There was a slight delay in accepting the claim for proceedings, but this is not the fault of the company, but rather the court, because. everything was submitted within the stipulated time. After the 4th meeting, I was voluntarily paid the money, which is the full merit of the company's lawyers and (which is important!) The lawyers did not abandon the case, but brought it to a court decision, according to which I was also awarded compensation for lawyers' expenses. I was very pleased with the result and the system of working with lawyers of the Trusted Lawyer company.
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Law firm "Trusted Lawyer" 2016-01-18 18:29 Dmitry_StroiCo
In mid-2015, the Central Bank of the Russian Federation revoked the license from the bank in which there was a solid (about one million) amount of funds. I was not in the registry, and all independent actions aimed at obtaining insurance compensation did not lead to anything. I am a person who has proven himself in business, but I am not so well versed in the legal field to storm the courts on my own. In the process of conducting my own struggle, I turned to the Trusted Lawyer company, providing the documents I had and reporting those that, after studying, the lawyers asked for. As a result, they filed a lawsuit, although I had little faith in the current system of justice. After the second trial, the representatives of the DIA asked to postpone the meeting with, allegedly, information they had about the consideration of documents for entering me into the register. A week later I received an SMS with a request to come to the agent bank to receive an insurance payment. At the moment, the case is at the stage of completion in connection with the withdrawal of claims, but the recovery of legal costs.
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Law firm "Trusted Lawyer" 2015-07-15 17:23 nikolaj_polos
I turned to the law firm "Trusted Lawyer" to agree on a contract for the purchase of apartments. As a result of our activities, we agreed on the contract and the company's lawyers took part in the negotiations. The contract was eventually agreed with the introduction of amendments taking into account my interests. The lawyers also helped to agree on the scheme and dates of payment under the acquisition agreement. I was satisfied with the work of the Trusted Lawyer.
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Law firm "Trusted Lawyer" 2015-05-25 16:49 natalija
In the summer of 2014, I had a big trouble: they revoked the license from Unicor Bank. And everything would be fine, but the DIA refused to pay insurance payments, citing the fact that “technical account entries made ... in 2014 did not reflect the actual receipt of funds in the cash desk of Unicor CB, but only created the appearance of cash transactions.” I don’t have a legal education, and I clearly understood that without a competent lawyer I couldn’t get my money back. With the help of the Internet, I chose Trusted Lawyer to conduct my case. I chose it because the company's website indicated that "Trusted Lawyer" faced a similar problem and successfully solved it. Having agreed on a meeting, I arrived at the office, where I talked with the employees of the company. I was told in an accessible form what and how to do. I signed a contract with this company and began to wait for the result. The result was positive - my deposit was returned to me. And all this is only thanks to the lawyers of the firm, for which I offer them my endless gratitude and wish them further success.
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Law firm "Trusted Lawyer" 2014-12-16 17:11 nik_matveev
We were looking for a company that could be entrusted with the support of a transaction with residential real estate, we wanted to resolve all issues before the new year. I admit, we turned to several companies to compare, what to say, personally, how they treat customers or react to certain reviews. As a result, we opted for the Trusted Lawyer. The case is nearing completion and we are pleased with the result.
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Lended to a friend, as I thought at the time. Well, at least I got a receipt. Six months later, a friend leaves for a small homeland and changes phones and addresses. I tried to find him, didn't work. The receipt was for a year (we verbally agreed so). I waited another year and began to seek the help of qualified lawyers: where to turn and to whom, if I know practically nothing about this friend? Appealed to Law Protection. We consulted, signed a contract - everything is fine. They found him, sued in my case, even helped to recover from him by court order. So I'm very happy. Thank you. Yes, I completely forgot: before contacting them, I went to others. They told me that the statute of limitations had passed. So I went to PravoZaschitu without much hope. And here they explained to me that the receipt does not contain the final date of the demand, so the period begins to run from the moment the demand is made to the debtor on the receipt, so in my case the deadline has not been missed. What am I for? Contact here, and not to any charlatans, otherwise you risk not even getting to court.
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